So I went did a second cut of my film, after being very disturbed by some parts. The story doesn’t change much, just some scenes are made easier to watch.

Watch the second cut at OurMedia or download it directly here.

For people using MacOS, I have no idea why there is yet to be a Mac version of the XviD codec. But you can download a mod here.

Actually after watching the second cut there are still portions which I’m not fully satisfied with. But then who will ever be? So I decided to just stop at two. =P

By the way, we got an A- for this film. Dr Edna commented that she “like the non-linear narrative and the way that you’ve constructed same scenes from different perspectives… However, what i find problematic is this report: it nicely details what the film is NOT… That’s a major weakness.”

Well I didn’t really care about the report anyway, I just want to shoot a film. We were showed a couple of other students works in lecture and though they had their own weaknesses, their story seems nicer than ours. Makes me kinda doubt my abilities in film making. Maybe I just need to find a good script writer. =P